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Thursday, November 26, 2009

Death of a Salesman

Flowers for Algernon, ah yes Rosa! A beautiful novel.

Is Rosa our only reader? It seems so. Regardless, 2 house points for her for some excellent blogging.

Contained below is an essat on DoS I found online, please read and feel free to comment on it.


The play "Death Of A Salesman" , the brainchild of Arthur Miller was transformed and fitted to the movie screen in the year 1986. The play itself is set in the house of Willy Loman, and tells the melancholy story of a salesman whom is in deep financial trouble, and the only remedy for the situation is to commit suicide. In the stage production of this tale, the specific lighting, set, and musical designs really give the story a strong undertow of depression. And logically the screen and stage productions both differ greatly in regards to the mood they set. Moreover the movie production can do many things that just cannot be done on stage, with reference to the setting of course. To generalize, the play gives us a good hard look at the great American Dream failing miserably. However the combination of both the stage and screen productions accurately depict the shortcomings of the capitalist society.

Death of a Salesman specifically focuses on four characters, the first being the main character Willy Loman, his wife Linda, and their two sons Hap and Biff Loman. As mentioned, the focal point of this play is Willy Loman, a salesman in his early sixties. Throughout the story we are told the hard life, emotions and triumphs of Willy the salesman. Early in the play we learn that he has recently been demoted to working for commission, which later in the play,(on par with his luck) translates into Willy getting fired. As the plot unfolds we discover that Willy had a rich brother who recently died named Ben, whom Willy looked upon with great admiration for becoming extremely wealthy and the ripe old age of 21. However Willy also becomes very depressed when Ben leaves, the fact being that he re-realizes the meagerness of his own life, and that he is still making payments on all of his possessions. Willy then comprehends that bye the time his worldly possessions are paid for…they shall no longer be of any use. For example, the Loman house has become virtually unnecessary now that the two sons have moved out. It isn't until after Willy's death that the final mortgage payment is made….for a house with no one inside it. The one example of this statement is given by Linda during the final paragraph of the play,

"I made the last payment on the house today. Today, dear. And there will be nobody home. We're free and clear……….we're free…….we're free…………we're free"

As the plot thickens, Willy the salesman plummets deeper and deeper into depression until his most likely route of action, which of course is suicide. However the reasoning behind this course of action, we find, is his genuine love for his family, along with Willy's deep longing to supply his family with as much money as he can possibly get his hands on. As we learn more about Willy's trials and tribulations, the age old expression "like father like son" appears out of nowhere like a beacon. Like his father, Willy's son Biff also has some problems of his own, the main one being that Biff cannot seem to find his niche in life. Furthermore, we are told that Biff at one point did in fact have his future all planned out. It turns out that Biff was a shoe-in for a position on the University Of Virginia State football team. However, that chance was all but lost when Biff did not qualify to pass his final mathematics course. Now as you can imagine the fact that Biff had to explain this to his father was quite a large problem in itself. But to add insult to injury, when Biff made the trip to Boston to explain his mathematical dilemma, he is horrified to find that his father has been with another women. And this one incident would leave Biff being an entirely different person altogether. He didn't even make an attempt to finish his math in summer school. After Boston, Biff couldn't have cared less what happened to his own life. However, as is in life, out of something horrible comes something worthy. And Biff finally comes to the realization that he in fact wants to make his future. And that future entails working in the outdoors on a farm. The other reasoning behind this life decision is of course, is to go against the wishes and values that his father has tried to instill in Biff his entire life. Biff pours his heart to his brother Hap one quarter through act I.

….."To devote your whole life to keeping stock, or making phone calls, or selling or buying. To suffer fifty weeks a year for the sake of a two week vacation, when all you really desire is to be outdoors, with your shirt off ..."

Fortunately for Biff, he determines his future by the play's conclusion. He comes to the understanding that he and Willy were never meat to be business men. Including that they were intended to be working on a farm with their hands. And after vexing to procure Hap to come with him (which is to no avail), he escapes from his home to continue on with the rest of his life. Which for Biff seems to be the soundest choice, the decision that Willy just couldn't make. Hap on the other hand stays with his father, and at play's end decides to follow in Willy's footsteps. That of course is to succeed at business at all costs.

Both the stage and screen rendition utilize a melange of distinct effects to set the tone and to enact the specific place where the action transpires. For example the stage interpretation utilizes a unique convention that involves walking through the set to delineate circumstances in the past, or episodes going on inside the mind of Willy. This illusion can be easily created with specific crossfades and musical underlay, and of course willing suspension of disbelief. Divergently, in the screen production the set is obviously utilized in a completely different manner. On that account the movie uses a distinct fading and brightening lighting technique, that still stays true to the conventions set forth by the playwright. The one device that the screen production contains that the stage does not, is the ability to display the past events of Willy's life in a completely accurately set manner. Meaning when there is a flashback to a previous happening, the setting travels back in time as well. Which, from a certain perspective, better illustrates the past recollections of Willy and his family. As mentioned the stage production successfully employs music to delineate certain characters or the tone of that particular instant. There is in fact music used in the movie, however it is only a small aspect of the screen medium whereas it is an integral component of the stage version. Although you cannot fully comprehend the importance of the music by simply reading the play, it must be performed right in front of you.. While the movie gives you a generally decent feel for the musical intonation. In its entirety the music does an excellent job of setting the mood that Willy is in.

The play is set inside the house of Willy Loman. Surrounding his house are some tall building that are quite visible on the edges of the set. The house itself contains two bedrooms, a living room and a kitchen. This is also where the majority of the action of the play takes place. All other action happens outside the house lines. Which for a stage audience requires them to suspend their disbelief even further. Whereas in a movie the viewer isn't required to stretch any of his or her imaginations. Although this particular screen production utilized a uncommon convention that allowed the viewer to actually see through the set. One other interesting convention used by the designer was that there was no roof on the house at certain times during the performance. And in place of the roof were huge buildings and skyscrapers. These buildings were used to divulge a over-powering feeling of gloom. This tool is much more effectual in the movie, due to its original and abstract nature. This was also was very helpful during Willy's dreams, on account of the house would exude an aura of peace an tranquillity. Together with the prevalent set in the movie, (where there is a roof and normal fencing), the idea is very well perceived.
In spite of the fact that this play has been described as a modern tragedy, there has been some controversy to that description. The reason being that it does not accompany the standard protocol of tragedy. Traditionally speaking, a tragedy usually begins with the main character in the midst of a prominent position of piety. And over the course of the play becomes transformed and that character flips to a lower level of status. A tragedy is also reputed to acquaint its audience with regard to life. The audience should leave a tragedy feeling virtuous about themselves,
even though the tragedy concludes on a note of melancholy. This is why scholars say they cannot include this play in the definition of tragedy.

This famous tale of a salesman contains a singular main character; Willy (The Salesman)Loman, his two strapping young lads Happy and Biff, and of course his adoring wife Linda. Willy struggles to climb his way up the American capitalist hierarchy, but its seems his ship will not come in. In spite of the fact that Willy would much rather be laboring with his hands, he is set in the mindset that his real love could never make enough money. Disappointment after disappointment Willy decides that his only way to provide for his family would be to commit suicide. The number one son of the salesman, Biff, is paving his way for a discouraging life. Symbolically speaking, the character of Biff represents Willy at a younger age, for they both carry the same characteristics. However Biff is given the same chance to do something with his life, and surprisingly enough he takes it. As for Willy's other son, Happy decides that he will take the same long, hard road as his father, only he thinks that he'll make it.

The Character of Willy Loman seem to be the consummate model to illustrate the dissension of the American capitalist ideals. For example he is a salesman who dons an aged suit that is ceaselessly creased during the course of the screen production, moreover in the script is directed to appear dilapidated. He drive an archaic, run down vehicle on the brink of extinction. While on the contrary, a proper salesman must appear presentable and attractive to market his goods. And Willy definitely does not harmonize with the ideals of being a salesman, divergently he pains to match it. Moreover that is the reason why he doesn't belong inside the world of business. As exemplified in the passage made by Biff in the requiem.

"When he'd come from a trip; or on Sundays, making the stoop………….…You know something Charley, there's more of him in that front stoop than in all the sales he ever made."
This story seems to epitomize the frivolity of agonizing to achieve something as insignificant as money and power. It definitely makes one question the social values of the American capitalist system, and why certain individual continue to pursue the ideals of that system on a daily basis. For the downside to the capitalist dream is hopelessness. And that downside is more that apparent in the Loman family.

28 comments:

  1. I like that they mention the stage effects and music because those stage directions really help to set the mood for the play. It also tells that Willy also doesn't fit in the business world but he does not realize that. This essay is very detailed and those quotations are great!

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  2. Thank you Ryan...anyone else care to comment?

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  3. Hello, Mr Pollicutt =)

    I don't really like this essay somehow. It's hard to explain - the vocabulary, details, mentioning of stage directions and other sources (e.g. the author talk quite a lot about the movie) make it very good, but I still don't like it.

    The way the essay is organised, I think, is quite chaotic - in some places I had a feeling that the paragraphs were just taken from many different essays:
    '...This is why scholars say they cannot include this play in the definition of tragedy.

    This famous tale of a salesman contains a singular main character; Willy (The Salesman)Loman...'
    (Am I the only one, who can't see the link between those two?)


    Moreover, if the reason why author actually told us the whole story again is that a reader might not know the play - than why, in the sentences like 'Hap on the other hand stays with his father, and at play's end decides to follow in Willy's footsteps. That of course is to succeed at business at all costs...' he uses 'of course'? The idea is not supported by any quotation from Miller, so a random reader might think of other ways in which Happy wants to succeed his father - to commite a suicide, as an example.

    And it has typos. ^__^"
    And repetitions. Of both words and ideas.

    ('As for Willy's other son, Happy decides that he will take the same long, hard road as his father, only he thinks that he'll make it.'

    'Hap on the other hand stays with his father, and at play's end decides to follow in Willy's footsteps.')

    It is good though in terms of understanding the ideas Miller put in the play, but I wouldn't say this is the best essay I've ever seen.

    Um... well... sorry ^____^"

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  4. Hi everyone,

    At my point of view, this essay mainly consists of the comparisons between the script and the movie production. In the movie, there are more interpretations for the transition between present and past, spoken words and thoughts (in Willy's mind). Moreover, Willy character appears more determined than Willy in the script, who is easily beaten-up. As Ryan has mentioned, the music, light and sound effects significantly contribute to the success of both of the script and movie production since these help to identify the characters and the tone.

    Moving on to the analysis of the play, at first, the writer have examined the characters' situations and their resolutions step by step which clearly illustrates the reasons why "Death of a salesman" has a tragic ending. Willy, Biff and Happy apparently share the same characteristics and are sunk in the whirl of delusions. The quotations have been utilised very appropriately and relevantly to highlight the explanation of frivolous actions to achieve money and status. This condemns the reverse side of the American Dream.

    This is a very detailed essay however, I did notice some typing mistakes. :D

    Thanks :) Have a nice weekend!

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  5. I don't like it...

    The comparisons between the movie and the play are detailed but like Liza said there's a lot of annoying repetitions.

    There are also times where it seems like the essay is to people who haven't read the book but at some points it seems the author assumes the reader knows what's going on. "To go against the wishes and values that his father has tried to instill in Biff his entire life." He hasn't really explained Willy's exact wishes and the way Biff was raised by Willy, it makes that sentence a little vague.

    I also don't like the writing style on this essay... I think it's the way he puts in his quotes, at the end of the paragraphs. And this weird sentence "Willy (The Salesman)Loman".

    Why are there so many typos? D:

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  6. We should watch the movie during class to help us understand this essay more :)

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  7. Sophia, yay! I'm not the only one who don't like it =)

    +1 for the movie idea!

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  8. I wanna watch the movie too :D Yayyy!

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  9. yes my blog works!
    well i thought the essay was very descriptitive and well orgaised. I also liked how he compared the lighting and musical aspects with mood.
    I also noticed some typo's.
    He also uses some great quotations but in one paragraph we used some really complicated words which made stop being interested.
    I also liked how he compared Willy with Biff and Happy and how Willy and Biff were similar at the start, then near the end Happy was following Willy's life.
    It was a good essay

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  10. Very good comments, thank you- especially from liza. Also it's interesting to see who commented....

    You're right, it is incongruously structured, but there are some insightful observations made. Still looking into the possibility of procuring a DVD of the movie.

    Please read that hard copy essay I gave you on Friday.

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  11. I have read the whole booklet but do we need to annotate anything?

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  12. You don't NEED to, but you should WANT to.

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  13. First of all, how long is this essay .. !
    I can't believe you just made me read that , Mr Pollicutt .. D:
    I could've been doing something more productive like watch This Is It .. !! :p

    This made me laugh : "appears out of nowhere like a beacon" haha .. firstly 'cause at first i thought it said "bacon" and secondly because it doesn't make sense. To me anyway.
    Anyway, moving on .....
    A very in depth summary of the play which i thought was fairly well done. However i felt that it kept going round and round and also the focus kept shifting to different points in the play but in an unchronological order .. this made it kind of confusing and annoying as well .. It could've perhaps been structured a bit better .. ?
    I also agree with Sophia and Liza it's very repetitive ... the fact that "Willy can only find one way to solve his family's dilemmas and that is to commit suicide" or whatever it says keeps getting repeated. And also how Willy and Biff are alike.

    I agree on the fact that the screen version probably did a better job at showing the past and the flashbacks and everything as the setting also changes and perhaps the characters' appearance as well.

    The "there's-no-roof-on-the-house-at-some-points-in-the-film" thing sounds interesting .. can we maybe watch the film too sometime, Mr Pollicutt ? :D

    That last paragraph was like a failed grand finale or something; most of the sentences didn't make sense and it had so many typos hahaha ..

    Overall it was quite good though .

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  14. Who suggested the question why does Charley say "it was a very nice funeral"? D:

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  15. Mr. Pollicutt, Annette doesn't have a blog account yet so she can't comment...

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  16. >"it was a very nice funeral"
    He might've said that to not hurt Linda's feelings :D
    Like... he was the only one to know that noone will come to the funeral, so he really didn't expect it to be nice... but he still wanted to make Linda calm down so he said that o.O'
    He also might've said that because only those who are close to Willy were there, only people who really had a reason to come - family and friends.

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  17. Yah... I agree with Liza and maybe he wants to show his respect to Willy, his poor friend!

    P/S: Sophia, don't blame me! I was the one who asked that question! =.='

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  18. I found another website with the (long) essay so I made Annette read it :P

    here's her comment:

    The essay expresses the play with much thought and exploration, and is presented to the reader as "to the point" yet has the capability to conjure interest, definitely a great framework to helping us see the play more objectively and further revealing many of Miller's intentions of the effect "death of a salesman" has on his audience.

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  19. and Annette said this too:

    "It is also worded and crafted perfectly not to confuse us, describing parts of the play in the order of occurance, unlike the confusement Willy's unchronological flash backs arouse."

    Uyen...

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  20. "He also might've said that because only those who are close to Willy were there, only people who really had a reason to come -family and friends."

    I was gonna say something like that but it seemed mean- only 5 people...

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  21. I think it's true! Although, to Willy, it might not be a nice funeral because there aren't many people coming which proves that he isn't so well-liked; Charley may think about the pleasantness in a different way (Willy's beloved people are gathering to say bye to him.)

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  22. But if it was to console Linda, wouldn't it be discouraging to her if she realises that only 5 people really care about willy?

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  23. I like the first line of this essay, especially the "brainchild" part :)

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  24. Sorry I read this so late :(

    Well, the one thing I like about this essay is probably already repeated 4 or 5 times within people's comments...but I find it very true.(the stage direction and music)The choice of quotations are good as well.

    But I didn't like how the writer repeated the same points over and over again. I also didn't like how the paragraphs are structured, in almost all of the paragraphs the writer told the process of how the character is shown to us(which might be a good thing) but the main focus of the character that usually comes at the end of the play were not emphasised. So when I read each paragraph, it seems like there was not much significance to how each character developed throughout the play. It was more like he did this, he did that and yeahhh.

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  25. MR. POLLICUTT!!
    I lost my hard copy of the other DOS essay
    :(

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  26. hi everyone,

    the essay is quite an easy one to understand and the essay was also very detailed and it helped me to get a better understanding of the 4 main Characters. it was also interesting to see how the set of the play was interpreted in a real movie with the stage directions.

    but there were things i didnt like about the essay, one was that the quotes he had could have been sewed into his work like u said to us, another one was that the writer repeated the story to us, maybe he was writing to readers who have not read the play, but to me it seems he is telling the story again.

    thank you for reading my coment.

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  27. Wait uhhh what hard copy ...............................

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